hello Moa it is Simon at St Bernadette's school I am reading your work and it sounds like you just moved and you are quite new to writing. maybe next time you could check your punctuation and make sure it makes sense.
Hi Moa, I was going through you post about your goals and it was really great reading, It is so cool seeing someone else from Tonga too. I liked how you said you are just getting to know your division. Something you could do next time is make sure that it make sense.
Hi Moa, I love your presentation about your goals. Maybe next time you could put each subject in different slides. Overall well done. Keep up the great work.
hello Moa it is Simon at St Bernadette's school I am reading your work and it sounds like you just moved and you are quite new to writing. maybe next time you could check your punctuation and make sure it makes sense.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for giving me some helpful comments. And yes I will go back check my punctuation,and making sure that it all makes sense.
DeleteHi Moa,
ReplyDeleteI was going through you post about your goals and it was really great reading, It is so cool seeing someone else from Tonga too. I liked how you said you are just getting to know your division. Something you could do next time is make sure that it make sense.
Hi Moa,
ReplyDeleteI love your presentation about your goals. Maybe next time you could put each subject in different slides. Overall well done.
Keep up the great work.